Having presented our pitch, the audience we presented it to gave us some feedback in the form of sticky notes. We then looked at the feedback and acted on it. Therefore, we have decided to take into consideration some of the comments they put. For example, they thought that we needed to make it more stereotypically Nottingham i.e. have it more working class or even film more of Nottingham. We didnt want to make it obviously Nottingham but we have decided to make it more woking class as the band (Arctic Monkeys) are also working class. Therefore, it would fit into the conventions of the band. Another comment was that they thought it was a good storyline and fitted well with the song so we are going to keep that as it is and just make a few minor adjustments as we go along. Also, they thought that the mingling of performance and the narrative would be especially difficult but we have decided to take it into consideration but still try and mingle the two together. However, if it doesnt work then we will certainly act on that comment.
Carys Bowen-jones, Tom Chamberlain & William Larkin
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